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Калягина Ирина Владимировна12703
Преподаватель иностранного языка (английский). По диплому также преподаватель педагогики, психологии, методист, учитель английского языка в детском саду. Последние 10 лет — в среднем профессиональном образовании Россия, Санкт-Петербург, Санкт-Петербург |
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Преподаватель: Ирина Владимировна Криницкая, преподаватель дисциплин ОДБ.03 Иностранный язык, ОНСЭ.03 Иностранный язык, ОГСЭ.03 Иностранный язык в профессиональной деятельности, ОП.08 Иностранный язык в сфере профессиональной коммуникации.
Cutting down trees can benefit us greatly, but it has quite a few disadvantages, too. Эссе
Вырубка деревьев может принести нам большую пользу, но она также имеет довольно много недостатков.
Пояснительная записка.
Учебное задание: написать короткое эссе с аргументами ЗА и ПРОТИВ.
Что вы можете сказать за и против вырубки деревьев? Напишите 120-180 слов, используя план:
Первый абзац: вступление (обозначение проблемы)
Второй абзац: аргументы «за»
Третий абзац: аргументы «против»
Четвёртый абзац: заключение
Выполнила студентка: БАБИНА ПОЛИНА
Курс: 1
Группа: 9КМ-11
Специальность: 38.02.04 Коммерция
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Количество слов: 178
I would like to tell you about cutting down trees. Today cutting down trees can bring a person well, I must say that it also has its share of disadvantages. Population growth and technological development are ruining nature.
First and foremost wood is an important building material for housing, and it is a source of fuel for heating. The most of tables, chairs, closets are made of wood
Although even though the trees can be re-planted, the rate of felling is too high, and the trees simply do not have time to grow again. It takes many years for the tree to become large. The forest is home to hundreds of species of flora and fauna. Animals and plants live in balance with nature. Man destroys this balance. Animals have nowhere to go. They die. Trees absorb carbon dioxide exhaled by living creatures, and process it. As a result, they produce vital oxygen. We need oxygen.
In summary, I believe that nowadays there are various methods to avoid cutting down trees and use other materials for our needs.
Сначала преподаватель только выделяет слова, словосочетания, в которых допущены ошибки – даёт возможность студенту самому обнаружить неточности. Затем обсуждаются нюансы, таким образом, проверка эссе носит поэтапный характер.
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Автор материала: П. Бабина (1 курс)
Опубликовано 28.07.21 в 11:14 в группе «УМК «Английский в фокусе» «Spotlight»»
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Deforestation is one of the most serious problems that the Earth is facing these days. Cutting down trees leads to a partial loss of oxygen, deprives animals of their habitats and affects the climate. These factors may cause the environmental problems and change the world for the worst.
First of all, people’s need for products made from woods makes them suffer from a climate and an environmental changes caused by the greenhouse effect. The more trees there are on the Earth, the more carbon dioxide they absorb, which prevents us from the greenhouse effect. However, the reducing number of nature’s «filters» makes the situation worse, adding global warming and harm to people’s health to the list of our problems.
Secondly, as deforestation leaves some animals without their habitats they become extinct. The species are exposed to winds, rains, sun rays, snowfalls, unfamiliar environment and humans so they have no choice but relocating to find shelters. It results in natural resources and food shortage because animals are an essential part of the nature’s chain.
Another reason why forests’ destruction is harmful is that a lot of people who live nearby the forests are left without their homes. They start protesting deforestation which is usually invain and may get in troubles because of the willingness to win back their houses.
To sum up, deforestation is among problems on everyones lips but which nobody is trying to stop. It totally changes our planet causing many problems. This is is a warning bell to the Earth population to use stuff made from trees wisely and find a way to protect our planet.
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Another reason why forests’ destruction is harmful is that a lot of people who live nearby the forests are left without their homes. They start protesting deforestation which is usually invain and may get in troubles because of the willingness to win back their houses.
How does this connected to homeless? This sentence is incomplete and illogical.
Forests’ destruction —- deforestation
I don’t understand what you trying to express.
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It is good if we know what your prompt is. Without knowing that it is difficult for us to understand what your topic expects you to write.
Yes, it is good if you can include the purpose of your writing because that allows others to provide you with more meaningful, especially task related feedbacks 
Are you preparing for IELTS or TOEFL? Or is this for a classroom assignment?
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This is a well written essay. You display very good writing skills, good grammar, excellent vocabulary etc.
Hello! Thank you for your feedback, I’m glad to hear that my essay is good enough:) Yes, it is just a classroom assignment.
Cutting down trees is necessary to produce wood for construction, paper and other applications, but logging and other activities that kill trees can potentially lead to negative impacts on ecosystems and the environment as a whole.
Significance
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Large scale tree cutting can lead to deforestation, a transformation of an area from forest to terrain with little vegetation. Plants create oxygen and absorb greenhouse gases. The destruction of trees may, therefore, encourage global warming. Changing temperatures can alter which organisms can survive in an ecosystem.
Effects
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Cutting trees can result in the loss of habitat for animal species, which can harm ecosystems. According to National Geographic, «70 percent of Earth’s land animals and plants live in forests, and many cannot survive the deforestation that destroys their homes.»
Considerations
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Tropical forests like the Amazon rain forest promote a cycle of evaporation and rainfall. Loss of the rain forests could result in warmer and drier climates near the tropics, according to NASA, which could destroy ecosystems that many animal and plants depend on.